I decided to write this week's story in the form of a post that I might make to the blog.
It’s Wednesday already and I think I had better make a start on doing my homework for the Friday morning Writing Group. As usual, the topics don’t immediately grab me and I let them sit in my sub-consciousness while I have a cup of coffee. Not yet inspired, I make the tentative choice of Poem for an August Afternoon but there’s no verb in the title so I’m not sure whether I should ‘find’ a poem or ‘write’ a poem but it’s a writing group so probably the latter. Anyway, I’ve no idea what to write so I’ll check Google to see whether someone else’s writing might be the spur I need.
I quite like the poem by Algernon Charles Swinburne:
In the mute August afternoon
They trembled to some undertune
Of music in the silver air;
Great pleasure was it to be there.
… but it’s not what I’m looking for. Maybe it’s too English so I turn to the New World and find this little ditty by Paul Laurence Dunbar:
When August
days are hot an’ dry,
I won’t sit by an’ sigh or die,
I’ll get my bottle (on the sly)
And go ahead, and fish, and lie …
Then, of course, I realise, they’re both writing for the Northern Hemisphere where the weather is warm. Those poems certainly don’t reflect a Tasmanian August. Here, in Australia, and especially in Tasmania, August is generally one of the colder months and I certainly won’t forget that just last week we had the worst snowstorm in my memory.
I go straight to my old favourites, Banjo Paterson and Henry Lawson, and there’s stuff there about Winter, but not specifically mentioning August. Roderick J Flanagan, an ex-patriate Irishman, in his poem Australian Winter, tries hard but his language is a bit flowery for my taste:
The hoar-frost marks the grassy lawn at morn,
But fades when the
first matin beam appears,
Till earth grows bright, as those erewhile forlorn,
Joy when their hope a
sunlit aspect wears.
In some ways, August seems to be the forgotten month for poets in the Southern Hemisphere – not quite Winter but not yet Spring. We imagine we’ve put the worst of Winter behind us and are now in some sort of self-induced hibernation until the first daffodil and wattle blooms tell us that Spring is here. It’s disappointing that poets seem to ignore the special flavour of a Tasmanian August- that never-ending dullness and dampness -so I have marked this month in Tasmania with an attempt at a haiku:
Grey skies overhead
Spreading their gloom on the world
A slough of despond.
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